I really liked your video so i decided to write you a review of what i think could have been done better imo.00:06
before the door mask, the movement of the scene is too rough.00:08-00:10
scenes are too slow while the pace of the song is gets faster.00:17
flash transition was really rough, it would have been better for it to have longer duration in the Athena part.00:36
the clip's movement is too strong while the song is not that fast at that point also the scenes before and after it are not that fast too, try making you scenes match in pace.00:51
the zoom out there wasn't the best option, because the character in the previous scene were moving towards the screen and you made the scene after that move outwards the screen.01:26
i would have given more frames to the white mask, it could have looked smoother imo.01:34
again like 00:51 you should have inverse the clip so as the scene to be zooming in.02:07
the mask transition is rough.
Overall the video was really enjoyable for an ic. I liked you flow and many of your transitions.
Your pace is a thing you should improve in your next clip. Good luck in the ic and in your future videos. Pas mal, bon travail
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